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The Electrolux
J. Price
  Working as a Real Estate agent and also at a local newspaper, I’m busy with both jobs, raising four daughters and having a sick husband, money is tight.

I dream of the day I can buy an Electrolux vacuum. This desire is far and away from my pocket book limits, but I can wish. 

With my real estate hat on, and enjoying the sunny warm day, I am previewing available homes for sale in the area. We are at a fairy tale designed charming modest home with a steep pitch roof and small, but adorable rooms, with wallpapered walls and wooden floors. The lot is on a slough. This slow-moving waterway is at the end of the back yard. It is a quiet, secluded area and close to the golf course. The home is vacant.

I am with the listing agent. After I see the layout of the home, check its condition and what it may need to be updated,  if people want to remove the special fairy tale look it has, we go inspect the shed in the back yard. It needs a bit of loving attention. As we look around inside,  I spot an Electrolux. All the attachments are near it. My heart beats fast. I turn to the listing agent and ask, “Do you think the owners would sell this vacuum?”

“They don’t care about it. You can have it.”

“Really?” I can’t believe my luck.

“Yes.”

I run over to it, open the front to look at the filter and see a nest of baby mice, nuzzled near their mama. The agent said, “Do you really want this?”

“Oh, yes. I need to relocate this little family of mama mouse and her babies so I can take the vacuum home.”

We find some rags and gently move the little brood out. I place them on a bottom shelf inside a small shoe box that was left in the shed and put an opening in the side for mama mouse to go in and out. I put fluffy cotton that I find nearby into the shoebox to make them comfortable. Before I put the top onto the box I watch the little ones, I see them wiggling and getting into the cotton. Mama seems comfortable too and is watches me, then turns and gathers her little ones closer to her. She seems to be happy with her new surroundings. I then place the top gently onto the box and know they will be comfortable and safe in their new little home. I take the emptied vacuum filter outside and shake it with the wind directed to carry all the dust away and place the filter into a paper bag that had been laying on the shelf in the shed. When I leave the house, I go to the local vacuum and sewing shop, show the salesman the filter and buy a replacement. He throws the old one out. Then, I take my prize home, clean and sterilize it. Presto, I have my dream come true.

And it works. Perfect.

I drive back into town and go to the pet store to pick up food for the mice. Since there are pet mice for sale in the shop I get help on what to buy. Then I drive over to the house and go in back to the shed where I set out the food, I make it handy for mama mouse.

What a wonderful day.  Mama mouse no longer lives in a home that ‘sucks’, and I honestly made a ‘clean’ getaway. I now can ‘tidy’ up with ease, and be ‘dirt’ free every day I use it. I whisper good bye to mama and her little mouse-kens. And I am thankful for my wonderful vacuum.

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J. Price © April 8, 2024.  Used with the permission of the author.

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